His eyes gaze forth; he knows the truth.
Intention shown, he makes them real,
the hopes, the dreams we all desire.
He is the one who looks beyond,
who tackles boundaries that challenge
fate, and wields the force of action.
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Second poem done. I’m really looking forward to tomorrow’s because of its background. I am trying to make ‘em shorter and less preachy too, hopefully making them better on the way. I actually revised this one from 10 lines to six and feel happier with it for doing so.
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